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We do not claim that these essays are by any means perfect. They have been chosen to be uploaded because we feel that they contain certain elements that applicants should look out for. There are also numerous aspects that all applicants should avoid. Hence these essays have been critiqued. You can access critiques for each paragraph by clicking on the appropriate button provided alongside the relevant paragraph.

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Critiqued Essays

Business Management 2
Business Management 1
Electrical Engineering

Uncritiqued Essays

Computer Science
Financial Engineering
Human Computer Interface (Comp Sci)
Life Sciences (Bio/Medical)
Marketing Research
MS/MBA International Finance - I
MS/MBA International Finance - II
Public Relations

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